Critique: At first glance, it looked like a nice piece. Looking closer, the way the information is organized makes the menu difficult to read. Everything, from the headers to the items and descriptions and prices, is centered. This makes the eye jump left and right when reading through because the center alignment makes for a jagged edge on each new line of text. Also, there's an awkward space between headers. Assuming that each page is made with two columns of info, the left column would have it's information aligned left, while the right column has it's information aligned right. Rather than doing the same with the headers, they aligned them center, which throws off the structure even more. It's just not a very readable design.
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