Critique: Overall, the menu seems a little plain, but it works for the general, old world theme. The illustrations seem a little floaty in places, but could be easily reworked into the flow of the design. I think what's really throwing me off are the slanted divider lines. There's a love-hate feeling I'm having with them. While they make the menu more interesting and create movement, they just feel too heavy and are distracting. It might help just to make them thinner. Aside from that, the bold, inverted headers were a great idea to add balance between the information and heavy border, and the information had a nice readability and is kept simple in its organization.
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