Critique: What sets this deign apart is the popping solid color against the grungy background. It was hard to miss, and I liked it a lot at first. Then a noticed a bunch of little changes that could be made. The heart gets lost behind the massive 'love', and I though it was a blob until I looked closer. They could shrink the heart down a little and move it into view. Also, 'amor' gets a little lost in the background. I do like how the solid strip on the bottom balances everything out, and they used the background really well to create hierarchy and depth.
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